Talk:Felicity Kendal/GA1
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Nominator: BennyOnTheLoose (talk · contribs) 16:04, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Edwininlondon (talk · contribs) 15:15, 10 September 2024 (UTC)
I shall review in the next few days. Edwininlondon (talk) 15:15, 10 September 2024 (UTC)
Hi @BennyOnTheLoose:, I have completed my review. I believe that this article meets the criteria. The sources look solid; formatting of sources as well. Verification: I don't have access to the often-used Gale, but I trust the claims are backed up, so not to worry. I did a spotcheck and #31 21 2 68 10 all checked out fine.
I have a few comments which you may wish to address:
- including as Barbara Good in the 1975 television series The Good Life --> we need consistency throughout the article for The Good Life's years. We have 1975, 1975–77, from 1975 to 1978, and 1975–78.
- She was initially approached --> the word initially suggests something that stopped it and only later did it come through, but the body has no such
- from 1975 to 1978 --> why repeat the years again?
- Kendal and Keith perform in The Norman Conquests --> saw Kendal and Keith perform in the play The Norman Conquests
- Summer 1973 --> avoid as per MOS:SEASON
- The Stoppard scholar Paul Delaney wrote in 1990 that Kendal "first dazzled Stoppard audiences" in On the Razzle, and created the poignant role of Annie in The Real Thing before playing Dotty in the 1985 revival of Jumpers, [in Hapgood] gives a towering performance in the most complex role Stoppard has ever written for a woman. --> I don't understand the structure of this sentence
- In 2014, she toured the UK --> repetition
- revival is repeated many times in short succession at the end of the Stage work section
That's all. Edwininlondon (talk) 11:53, 13 September 2024 (UTC)
- Many thanks, Edwininlondon. The Gale source is available via Wikipedia Library if you have that access. (Go to Gale, select "Biography", and search for Felicity Kendal). Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:35, 13 September 2024 (UTC)
- Hopfully I've addressed all the comments, Edwininlondon, but please let me know if anything else is required. Thank you again. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 15:26, 13 September 2024 (UTC)