Talk:Sidney, New York

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Emotional language that doesn't belong in Wikipedia, with words like "tragic", "respectable", "interesting". It's generally written as a newspaper piece or even copied from one. Also has spelling/grammar errors. Section needs to be rewritten.--Sanya3 (talk) 17:02, 3 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Section rather needs to be deleted. If this event is notable it should have an article, it's not something found usually in town articles. A short mention of the incident, in the history section, would be appropriate. Kraxler (talk) 17:16, 3 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]