Talk:Roy's Wedding

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Article milestones Date Process Result October 13, 2012 Good article nominee Listed August 22, 2013 Good topic candidate Promoted
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 16:23, 30 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Comment Why aren't there any project banners on the talk page? It's quit important for sorting. Glimmer721 ^talk 00:50, 8 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

• Link The Office in the infobox
• Where is the running time referenced?
• Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK
• In the episode should be "In this episode"
• In plot, "8AM" should be "8 am", as per MOS:TIME
• % should be wrote out fully as "percent"
• "On Twitter, David Denman" remove David as first mention is above, as per WP:MOS
• Link NBC in ratings
• " 6.8/10" write out fully
• Ref. 1 has WP:DASH issues
• How is Zap2it a reliable source?
• Same goes for OfficeTally
• Ref. 5 should have TVLine linked
• Ref. 11: Double quotes (") should be single quotes ('), as per WP:MOS, and curly quotes should be regular, in ref. 11, 13
• Why do some references have publishers and others don't?
• Add alt text to the images

On hold until the issues are addressed. TBrandley 17:50, 9 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I believe I have addressed all the issues NoD'ohnuts (talk) 06:09, 13 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Actually, not all of them, but I got the ones you missed. Passing. TBrandley 14:45, 13 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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