Talk:John Swan (Bermudian politician)

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This article must be one of the most overtly POV biographies of politicans. It could almost have been written by Swan's PR team. I suggest that it be re-written to be more neutral. Also why is he called a British-Bermudian? There is nothing said about his background at all. I always thought he was simply a Bermudian. Swan is an old Bermudian family. Or is the use of "British" meant to imply that he is of British extraction? If that is the case this is wrong - and racist. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 124.197.15.138 (talk) 21:28, 12 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]