User contributions for 82.113.133.21

23 April 2013

• 16:3516:35, 23 April 2013 diff hist −4 Gilet improve style

22 April 2013

• 09:5209:52, 22 April 2013 diff hist −6 Shirataki noodles chg "This gets rid of the aku (bitterness)" to "This gets rid of the bitterness" - no reason to throw in a Japanese synonym here

18 April 2013

• 14:3814:38, 18 April 2013 diff hist −16 Dwarf (folklore) "dwerrow" is not Modern English. only J R R Tolkien has used it. see Google Books search results for the word.
• 14:3714:37, 18 April 2013 diff hist −1 Nuno sa punso →Description: grammar

11 April 2013

• 11:5811:58, 11 April 2013 diff hist +1 Steve Coast →Personal life: comma

9 April 2013

• 08:2408:24, 9 April 2013 diff hist −36 Trent Reznor →Collaboration with Dr. Dre's Beats Electronics: apostrophe
• 08:1908:19, 9 April 2013 diff hist −5 How to Destroy Angels (band) →Releases

3 April 2013

• 15:1815:18, 3 April 2013 diff hist −1 Adol Dam remove incorrect comma
• 15:1415:14, 3 April 2013 diff hist −4 Michael Robertson (businessman) typo
• 15:0715:07, 3 April 2013 diff hist +20 Microsoft PlaysForSure put the info about start/end of PFS lifetime in the same place
• 15:0615:06, 3 April 2013 diff hist −1 Zune →Preloaded content: bad comma
• 15:0615:06, 3 April 2013 diff hist −2 Zune grammar

19 March 2013

• 12:4912:49, 19 March 2013 diff hist −7 Amala (food) No edit summary

11 March 2013

• 21:2521:25, 11 March 2013 diff hist +7 Mega Man 9 →Reception and legacy: grammar
• 17:2317:23, 11 March 2013 diff hist 0 Ancient Domains of Mystery →Herbs: grammar

8 March 2013

• 13:3413:34, 8 March 2013 diff hist 0 Hosea Williams "inner circle" is 2 words
• 13:3413:34, 8 March 2013 diff hist −130 Reverse racism →In the United States: remove apparent nonsense: "at which point" starting a sentence, and no point in time has been mentioned
• 13:2613:26, 8 March 2013 diff hist +1 Reverse racism apostrophe
• 12:3912:39, 8 March 2013 diff hist −12 Association for the Study of African American Life and History →Notable fact about the convention: silly header. change to "Derived organizations"
• 08:3108:31, 8 March 2013 diff hist 0 Cyberdog (shop) →History: bad hyphen

7 March 2013

• 15:5215:52, 7 March 2013 diff hist +238 Wikipedia talk:List of Wikipedians by number of edits →What is the purpose of this list?: new section
• 10:3010:30, 7 March 2013 diff hist 0 Copper phthalocyanine Monastral blue was/is a trade name and is nearly always found with the capital M
• 10:2710:27, 7 March 2013 diff hist +4 Gel pen avoid ambiguous "they"
• 08:4308:43, 7 March 2013 diff hist −2 Wallop past tense of "lead" is "led"
• 08:4308:43, 7 March 2013 diff hist +1 FOAF hyphen needed, since "him-" is short for "himself"
• 08:4208:42, 7 March 2013 diff hist −20 Wallop redundant "originally...its origins"

6 March 2013

• 11:2411:24, 6 March 2013 diff hist −1 Corporate entertainment No edit summary
• 10:0410:04, 6 March 2013 diff hist +7 Knowledge Generation Bureau It is believed{{who}} to be the third largest such player in the UK - who says? what are the other two?

5 March 2013

• 13:1213:12, 5 March 2013 diff hist −14 Timeline of computer viruses and worms →1974/1975: you coin a word. you don't coin the use of a word
• 13:1013:10, 5 March 2013 diff hist −1 AutoCAD bad comma
• 12:1612:16, 5 March 2013 diff hist −6 Data wrangling change "credited as deriving" to "said to derive". nobody is giving a term "credit" for having been derived
• 08:2708:27, 5 March 2013 diff hist +13 Iran–United States copyright relations →Freely distributed unlicensed software: caps

4 March 2013

• 14:4214:42, 4 March 2013 diff hist −8 Akeelah and the Bee →Plot: grammar
• 13:4113:41, 4 March 2013 diff hist +8 Internet Explorer 10 →User interface: "string" is programmer jargon. use "word or phrase".
• 13:4113:41, 4 March 2013 diff hist −2 Internet Explorer 10 →User interface: bad commas
• 13:3913:39, 4 March 2013 diff hist −94 Internet Explorer 10 →Adobe Flash integration: redundant
• 13:3913:39, 4 March 2013 diff hist −6 Internet Explorer 10 →Adobe Flash integration: redundant "also...also"
• 13:2513:25, 4 March 2013 diff hist −399 Whompyjawed delete appar rubbish
• 13:1413:14, 4 March 2013 diff hist +5 Ondol →Use: style: spell out low numbers in words
• 13:1113:11, 4 March 2013 diff hist −10 Fan death →Origins of belief: redundant word
• 12:5512:55, 4 March 2013 diff hist −16 Crocoduck No edit summary

27 February 2013

• 14:0414:04, 27 February 2013 diff hist +2 EDIFACT →Current state of EDIFACT: grammar
• 14:0214:02, 27 February 2013 diff hist +3 EDIFACT →Structure: grammar. "it...are" is wrong

26 February 2013

• 12:0012:00, 26 February 2013 diff hist +14 3 →Evolution of the glyph: grammar
• 10:2910:29, 26 February 2013 diff hist 0 Princess Protection Program →Plot: missing bracket
• 10:1410:14, 26 February 2013 diff hist +5 DJMax Technika →Gameplay: "for example" is abbreviated "e.g." not "ex"
• 10:0110:01, 26 February 2013 diff hist −3 Let's trim our hair in accordance with the socialist lifestyle grammar

25 February 2013

• 13:1113:11, 25 February 2013 diff hist +1 Spam (video games) →Weapon spamming: grammar
• 13:0813:08, 25 February 2013 diff hist −1 Controversies surrounding Call of Duty: Modern Warfare 2 split para for readability
• 13:0613:06, 25 February 2013 diff hist −101 Pramface →Online: remove info about unofficial fan Twitter accounts. not notable at all. e.g. PramfaceBeth has only 20 followers!!