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==What does club in club foot mean?==
I think there should be a part somewhere in this article explaining this. Is it because the legs are shaped like a [[golf club]]? <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/49.50.207.90|49.50.207.90]] ([[User talk:49.50.207.90|talk]]) 08:01, 26 March 2012 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
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== In non-human animals ==
Would it be within the scope of this article to add a couple paragraphs on club feet in other animals, specifically horses? In horses, it's quite common. Occurs due to a somewhat different process, I think (I'll have to do some research before adding anything) but I'd like to either create a new article or add on to this one. Basically I don't want to create a new article/content fork if it isn't appropriate, but I'd also not want to add stuff to this article that's beyond its scope if it's confined to the human condition only. Opinions? [[User:Montanabw|<
:No one complained, so I added a couple of paragraphs and tagged the article for WPEQ. If anyone feels this material is beyond the scope and wants to move it to a new article on clubfeet in non-humans, let me know. I don't have the intent to expand the section much at present, but maybe later. Eventually we may want to create a new article just for horses, but would prefer to have a lot more material to add first. [[User:Montanabw|<
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IMO it flowed well as it was? [[User:Doc James|<span style="color:#0000f1">'''Doc James'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Doc James|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Doc James|contribs]] · [[Special:EmailUser/Doc James|email]]) 00:30, 16 December 2019 (UTC)
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I have restored a bunch of reference to the lead. [[User:Doc James|<span style="color:#0000f1">'''Doc James'''</span>]] ([[User talk:Doc James|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Doc James|contribs]] · [[Special:EmailUser/Doc James|email]]) 01:55, 21 December 2019 (UTC)
==Wiki Education assignment: UCSF SOM Inquiry In Action-- Wikipedia Editing 2022==
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== Wiki Education assignment: UCSF SOM Inquiry In Action-- Wikipedia Editing 2022 ==
I think this article was well written and informed me of a new medical condition I have never formally learned about in medical school. The one comment I have is to possibly consider rearranging the article such that the history, cultural references, and epidemiology to the beginning of the article page before the signs and system, which should improve the article flow. [[User:Brandongo60|Brandongo60]] ([[User talk:Brandongo60|talk]]) 04:14, 17 September 2022 (UTC)
== Feedback on Clubfoot Article - Overview and Cultural Competency ==
In reviewing the clubfoot article, it is clear that there was lots of time, energy, and dedication put into creating a cohesive and informative page. The edits regarding etiologies and ensuring that the communicated information is culturally aware has definitely elevated the article. [[User:Zurcnhoj|Zurcnhoj]] ([[User talk:Zurcnhoj|talk]]) 04:17, 17 September 2022 (UTC)
== Consider simplifying the language ==
Parts of this article are impenetrable for people with average education. At least, there should be explanations (or weblinks to them) for the more obscure terms.
Better would be to rewrite, avoiding medical terminology as possible, like "environmental insult" for physical harm, or "oligohydramnios" and many others just in this one paragraph (Causes, extrinsic factors):
Factors that can influence the positioning of the fetal foot in utero include oligohydramnios, breech presentation, Müllerian anomalies, multiple gestation, amniotic band sequence, or amniocentesis at <15 weeks of gestation. In cases that impede normal growth and position for longstanding period of times, clubfoot can be accompanied with other deformations and may be associated with developmental hip dysplasia. The theory of fetal growth arrest was proposed by Von Volkmann in 1863, and has been verified by other authors since. According to this theory, intrinsic errors or environmental insults during gestation prevents the correction of an equinovarus to pronated foot. Other researchers hypothesize that clubfoot may derive from external insults during gestation. For example, a research study found an alarmingly high incidence of club foot and limb contractures associated with iatrogenic amniotic leakage caused by early amniocentesis between the 11th and 12th week of gestation. [[User:Geke|Geke]] ([[User talk:Geke|talk]]) 21:27, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
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