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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was promoted by Hey man im josh via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 13 November 2024 (UTC) [1].[reply]

76th Primetime Emmy Awards

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76th Primetime Emmy Awards (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): Birdienest81talk & RunningTiger123 (talk) 17:56, 10 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating the 2024 Primetime Emmys for featured list because we believe it has great potential to become a Featured List. I followed how the 2020, 2021, and 2022 were written and structured. Note: I also listed RunningTiger123 as a co-nominator since he made considerable and significant contributions to this list. Birdienest81talk 17:56, 10 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

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  • "The award ceremony" - is this an Americanism? I am British and we would say "awards ceremony" but maybe American usage is different......?
  • "The aforementioned program was " - I think just "It was" would be fine
  • "they along with D'Pharaoh Woon-A-Tai of the series Reservation Dogs were the first " => "along with D'Pharaoh Woon-A-Tai of the series Reservation Dogs they were the first "
  • "Nominations and wins by network" - are all these really "networks"? Is Netflix or BBC America a "network"? Maybe "Nominations and wins by broadcaster" would be better.....?
  • "He also called the choice of Jelly Roll's performance of "I Am Not Okay" as "tonally questionably" " => "He also called the choice of Jelly Roll's performance of "I Am Not Okay" "tonally questionably" " or "He also described the choice of Jelly Roll's performance of "I Am Not Okay" as "tonally questionably" " -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:27, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    All done except the network item – previous years use the term "network" and it's often the term used in other sources (e.g., Variety, Deadline, Television Academy) so consistency might be better here. RunningTiger123 (talk) 14:55, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:06, 11 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Image review

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  • The WP:FUR rationale on the first image is fine.
  • Captions are appropriate.
  • Free-use tags are fine. I didn't personally get into Flickr to check the Eugene Levy image, but a reviewer did check it. Otherwise, source links are fine.
  • The images are all suitable.
  • Pass. - Dank (push to talk) 18:40, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sgubaldo

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  • He also called the choice of Jelly Roll's performance of "I Am Not Okay" "tonally questionably" ==> He also called the choice of Jelly Roll's performance of "I Am Not Okay" "tonally questionable" (the source says tonally questionable)
  • Robert Lloyd wrote in the Los Angeles Times that the telecast was.... ==> Wikilink Los Angeles Times
  • Ben Travers of IndieWire found Eugene and Dan Levy's performances as hosts..... ==> italicise IndieWire
@Sgubaldo: All done except inline LA Times link (it is linked earlier in the prose). RunningTiger123 (talk) 17:08, 25 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Support. Sgubaldo (talk) 18:14, 25 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Did a source review of my own, and everything looks good. Hey man im josh (talk) 14:13, 12 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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