Talk:I Shall Be Free No. 10
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Reviewer: Eurohunter (talk · contribs) 19:20, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
@BennyOnTheLoose: I started review. Comments will be below. Review within 2023 GAN Backlog Drives. Eurohunter (talk) 19:20, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
Lead
edit- "Dylan has never performed the song live in concert." - how is this checked? Eurohunter (talk) 12:34, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
- I've amended this to "According to his official website, Dylan has never performed the song in concert." per the body text. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:04, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
Background and recording
edit- I think that two wods "composed in stages" don't need quotation marks. Eurohunter (talk) 12:34, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
- It is a direct quote from Heylin's book, so I'd rather keep the quotation marks. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:14, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
- "In 2010, a mono version was released on The Original Mono Recordings." - I think it's worth that's it's box set compilation album and it's his album. Eurohunter (talk) 12:34, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
- I've added this. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:14, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
Critical reception
edit- "In a generally negative review of the album" - I think it's worth to mention which album. Eurohunter (talk) 12:34, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
- "In 1976, William Florence of The Times Herald wrote that on Another Side of Bob Dylan" - that's retrospective review. Eurohunter (talk) 12:34, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
- Herald Express review is from 1964. Why there is no chronology? Eurohunter (talk) 12:34, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
- I've added the album title in. As there are so few reviews available, I've retitled the section "Critical comments" and put the comments in chronological order. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:33, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
Other
edit- Would you upload and add audio sample to infobox? Eurohunter (talk) 12:34, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
- There's already a link to the official audio in the infobox, and I think it would be hard to justify a fair use sample in addition to this as I'm not sure it is necessary to illustrate any of the points - but let me know if you have something in mind. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:32, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
- Reference 8. Why Olof Björner isn't linked? Also Rolling Stone in reference 14. Eurohunter (talk) 12:34, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
- I've added those links. BennyOnTheLoose (talk)
- Only three online references? Eurohunter (talk) 12:34, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
- Yes - I didn't find much in the way of usable sources online. if you know of any relaible online sources I've missed, let me know. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 00:32, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
Summary
edit Article met the requirements. Eurohunter (talk) 17:54, 15 August 2023 (UTC)