User contributions for 82.17.137.106

19 June 2023

• 16:5316:53, 19 June 2023 diff hist −44 Cambridge Cable Removed 'homepage' as this disappeared at least a decade ago
• 07:2507:25, 19 June 2023 diff hist −26 Turbojet →History: Simplified some very contorted English

18 June 2023

• 12:5412:54, 18 June 2023 diff hist −16 Yorker Fixed tautology - who else would bowl but the bowler?

15 June 2023

• 13:2613:26, 15 June 2023 diff hist −2 Infiniti →2000s: Rogue apostrophe

11 June 2023

• 10:1410:14, 11 June 2023 diff hist −1 Blue Sapphire (ship) →Saga Cruises: Better English
• 10:1410:14, 11 June 2023 diff hist −1 Blue Sapphire (ship) →Saga Cruises: "whilst" is an outdated version of while
• 10:1310:13, 11 June 2023 diff hist −4 Blue Sapphire (ship) →Saga Cruises: "Throughout" implies near-continuous incidents, which is misleading
• 10:0810:08, 11 June 2023 diff hist −1 Spirit of Adventure (2020 ship) No edit summary
• 09:3709:37, 11 June 2023 diff hist −1 Sandy McDade →Professional life
• 09:3609:36, 11 June 2023 diff hist −20 Sandy McDade →Professional life: Simplified very contorted English
• 09:3209:32, 11 June 2023 diff hist −2 David Schneider (actor) →Film: Schneider is English, so let's use British English in his profile. In Britain trains are driven by drivers, not engineers,
• 09:2609:26, 11 June 2023 diff hist −6 Hamish Macbeth (TV series) →Synopsis: Used the more usual way to present nicknames

10 June 2023

• 22:3922:39, 10 June 2023 diff hist −5 Seymour Cray →Personal life: Better English

8 June 2023

• 07:4207:42, 8 June 2023 diff hist +1 Wallace John Eckert →Manhattan Project: You do not "conceive towards"

4 June 2023

• 11:2411:24, 4 June 2023 diff hist +10 Allison Janney No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 11:2311:23, 4 June 2023 diff hist +1 Allison Janney →Activism: Unhyphenated, co-stars is incorrect Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17 May 2023

• 16:3916:39, 17 May 2023 diff hist +1 Battle of the Diamond →Aftermath

10 May 2023

• 14:0014:00, 10 May 2023 diff hist +1 Grace Hightower →Personal life: The originator has confused the meanings of upscale (relating to size) and upmarket (relating to exclusiveness).
• 09:1209:12, 10 May 2023 diff hist −15 Debbie Harry Simpler less contorted English

9 May 2023

• 22:3722:37, 9 May 2023 diff hist +2 Brian Paddick, Baron Paddick The previous text implied that there was only one DAC in the Met - there are several
• 17:4917:49, 9 May 2023 diff hist +16 Newry Canal No edit summary
• 09:4209:42, 9 May 2023 diff hist +13 William Dargan →William Dargan and 1853 Dublin Exhibition
• 09:4109:41, 9 May 2023 diff hist −1 William Dargan →William Dargan and 1853 Dublin Exhibition: Confused mixed tenses

6 May 2023

• 17:1617:16, 6 May 2023 diff hist −59 Glasgow Harbour Tunnel Rotundas →Current use: Simplified over-complex English.
• 17:1417:14, 6 May 2023 diff hist +1 Glasgow Harbour Tunnel Rotundas →Current use: Very poor English corrected

25 April 2023

• 22:5222:52, 25 April 2023 diff hist 0 Pietro Aglieri →Mafia career Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 22:5022:50, 25 April 2023 diff hist +2 Pietro Aglieri No edit summary Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

19 April 2023

• 20:5620:56, 19 April 2023 diff hist −2 Tovrea Castle →Tovrea Castle at Carraro Heights: It is a center for visitors (plural) rather than a center belonging to a visitor (singular).

23 March 2023

• 20:4620:46, 23 March 2023 diff hist +5 History of roads in Ireland →17th century: Improved the English

22 March 2023

• 09:3609:36, 22 March 2023 diff hist +6 USAir Flight 405 →Flight history: he was qualified to fly types of aircraft, not individual aircraft which is how the text read

21 March 2023

• 22:4422:44, 21 March 2023 diff hist +11 Canal No edit summary
• 22:4322:43, 21 March 2023 diff hist 0 Canal The original text gave the impression the term was still used; it is not, it is archaic.

13 March 2023

• 17:3117:31, 13 March 2023 diff hist 0 High Sheriff of Armagh Spelling mistake corrected

10 March 2023

• 11:3011:30, 10 March 2023 diff hist −27 The Wave (company) No edit summary
• 11:2911:29, 10 March 2023 diff hist +1 The Wave (company) Obvious!

28 February 2023

• 10:2510:25, 28 February 2023 diff hist 0 Harland & Wolff →Restructuring and InfraStrata takeover: Another incorrect tense
• 10:2410:24, 28 February 2023 diff hist −1 Harland & Wolff →Restructuring and InfraStrata takeover: Icorrect tense and removed het another 'whilst'
• 10:2210:22, 28 February 2023 diff hist −7 Harland & Wolff →Post-war period: Removed inappropriate 'whilst'
• 10:2010:20, 28 February 2023 diff hist +9 Harland & Wolff →Early history
• 10:1910:19, 28 February 2023 diff hist +1 Harland & Wolff →Early history
• 10:1810:18, 28 February 2023 diff hist +1 Harland & Wolff →Early history: Improved clumsy sentence structure
• 10:1710:17, 28 February 2023 diff hist −5 Harland & Wolff →Early history: Spurious 'also' removed
• 10:1610:16, 28 February 2023 diff hist +16 Harland & Wolff →Early history
• 10:1510:15, 28 February 2023 diff hist −2 Harland & Wolff →Early history: Use more typically UK English

27 February 2023

• 17:2817:28, 27 February 2023 diff hist −2 Karen Spärck Jones →Death and Legacy: English person, English spelling, not American
• 17:2517:25, 27 February 2023 diff hist −7 Karen Spärck Jones →Early life and education: The wrong tense had been used

25 February 2023

• 09:5609:56, 25 February 2023 diff hist −6 Jill Sinclair →Career: ‘First started’ is tautology Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

21 February 2023

• 16:0016:00, 21 February 2023 diff hist +4 Thomas Hertog corrected the tense
• 00:0400:04, 21 February 2023 diff hist +25 High Sheriff of Armagh →James I, 1603–1625 Tag: Reverted

20 February 2023

• 23:5623:56, 20 February 2023 diff hist −8 High Sheriff of Armagh →History: Very bad and misleading English corrected Tag: Reverted