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20 September 2024

• 01:4001:40, 20 September 2024 diff hist −51 Mortal Kombat Annihilation Merge duplicate information about Novel.
• 01:3901:39, 20 September 2024 diff hist −15 Mortal Kombat Annihilation Novel. Citation needed. Book ref with ISBN
• 00:0600:06, 20 September 2024 diff hist −93 Alien: Romulus WP:ELDUP Rotten Tomatoes already included in Reception section, no need to repeat it in External links.
• 00:0500:05, 20 September 2024 diff hist −70 Alien: Romulus Template:Cite web remove session junk from URL (see also UTM parameters)
• 00:0300:03, 20 September 2024 diff hist +527 Wikipedia talk:Manual of Style/Film →Copyedit of MOS:FILMRATING: WP:CSECTION policy against creating "Controversy" sections

19 September 2024

• 23:5623:56, 19 September 2024 diff hist +19 Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles: Mutant Mayhem Better to include more than one source when available.
• 23:5223:52, 19 September 2024 diff hist +2 Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles: Mutant Mayhem Gross. Use same figures consistently. MOS:LARGENUM Round numbers in the normal way. $180.5 million normally rounds up to $181 million, it is inaccurate and misleading to truncate it down to $180 million. This is an encyclopedia, basic mathematics should be correct.
• 23:3923:39, 19 September 2024 diff hist +15 The Breakfast Club Release section should be clearly sourced. Merge duplicate Box Office Mojo reference. Remove WP:ELDUP
• 23:2823:28, 19 September 2024 diff hist −151 The Breakfast Club Template:Cite web remove session junk from URL
• 23:2723:27, 19 September 2024 diff hist −40 The Breakfast Club WP:STREAMLINE avoid scene transitions, just the WP:FILMPLOT.
• 23:2223:22, 19 September 2024 diff hist +107 The Breakfast Club WP:ALT Describe the poster image.
• 23:2123:21, 19 September 2024 diff hist −41 The Breakfast Club No need to repeat full film title, I'm sure normal readers haven't forgotten it already since the previous paragraph.
• 23:1923:19, 19 September 2024 diff hist +158 The Breakfast Club Accolades section not properly referenced.
• 23:1523:15, 19 September 2024 diff hist −14 The Breakfast Club WP:FILMPLOT just the plot. not out of plot information like the fact that the school is fictional.
• 23:1323:13, 19 September 2024 diff hist −9 The Breakfast Club WP:SHORTDESC short description is supposed to be short and disambiguate from similar titles, the key person is relevant, the nationality is not.
• 22:4422:44, 19 September 2024 diff hist 0 The Hunger Games: Mockingjay – Part 2 Gross. Use same figures consistently. Lead section did not match article body or Infobox.
• 22:4222:42, 19 September 2024 diff hist −43 The Hunger Games: Mockingjay – Part 1 Template:Cite web remove session junk from URL (see also UTM parameters)
• 22:4122:41, 19 September 2024 diff hist +2 The Hunger Games: Mockingjay – Part 1 MOS:AMP avoid unnecessary ampersands
• 22:4122:41, 19 September 2024 diff hist −3 The Hunger Games: Mockingjay – Part 1 Gross. Use same figures consistently. MOS:LARGENUM No need to use qualifiers such as "over" when numbers are rounded in the normal way.
• 22:3922:39, 19 September 2024 diff hist +10 The Hunger Games (film) Gross. Use same figures consistently in article body, lead and Infobox. MOS:LARGENUM No need to use qualifiers when numbers are rounded in the normal way.
• 22:3522:35, 19 September 2024 diff hist +6 Transformers One MOS:NUMERAL use words.
• 22:0322:03, 19 September 2024 diff hist +4 Comparison of Star Trek and Star Wars MOS:NUMERAL use words. NOTE: 12 films 9 + 2 + 1 animated clone wars film that was released theatrically.
• 22:0022:00, 19 September 2024 diff hist +56 Comparison of Star Trek and Star Wars As of today? You need to read WP:RELTIME and never write like this ever again.
• 21:5721:57, 19 September 2024 diff hist +148 Comparison of Star Trek and Star Wars →Estimated financial comparisons: Tables entirely without sources. All these figures should be properly WP:V verified with inline references.
• 21:5421:54, 19 September 2024 diff hist −41 Comparison of Star Trek and Star Wars Remove unhelpful digression, stay on target.
• 21:5021:50, 19 September 2024 diff hist −129 Logan (film) WP:UNDUE "Jaurez" is an interesting production detail but frankly it is minor trivia that does not a key detail that should be highlighted in the lead section.
• 21:4821:48, 19 September 2024 diff hist −72 Logan (film) No need to repeat film title at the start of every paragraph, I'm sure normal readers will not have forgotten the title after only one paragraph. Also try to keep lead section concise.
• 21:4421:44, 19 September 2024 diff hist +59 Logan (film) Partially restore category added by User:Ser_Amantio_di_Nicolao
• 21:4321:43, 19 September 2024 diff hist −147 Logan (film) Revert unexplained changes. Restore concise summary in lead, not the place to explain or minor details. Tag: Undo
• 21:3921:39, 19 September 2024 diff hist −75 Logan (film) WP:LEAD is supposed to summarize key details in the article body. It is WP:UNDUE to highlight Days of Future Past in the lead, it is incidental and not important to this film Tag: Undo
• 21:2821:28, 19 September 2024 diff hist 0 The Hunger Games: The Ballad of Songbirds & Snakes Not constructive to leave the article in an inconsistent state by updating only the Infobox without also updating the lead section and box office section and the reference access-dates. WP:INFOBOXPURPOSE is to summarize key points from the article, update the article first or not at all. Tag: Undo
• 21:2621:26, 19 September 2024 diff hist +14 The Hunger Games: The Ballad of Songbirds & Snakes Revert unexplained delete. That's literally the name of the production company. Undid revision 1245008631 by Sigwartsson1 (talk) Tag: Undo
• 21:1921:19, 19 September 2024 diff hist −15 Borderlands (film) The lead section includes a warming comment not to add ovewhelmingly and the lead section is supposed to be summarizing what is actually in article body. WP:POV supports many negative revies, it doesn't support "overwhelmingly" this film didn't even hit "overwhelming dislike" on Metacritic. Undid revision 1246232819 Tag: Undo
• 19:1619:16, 19 September 2024 diff hist +8 Will Cain Currently? Since when? WP:RELTIME
• 17:5217:52, 19 September 2024 diff hist −4 Longlegs Copyedit.
• 17:4117:41, 19 September 2024 diff hist −15 Transformers One WP:STREAMLINE avoid scene transitions, just the plot. (There shouldn't be any need to say post credits, either the scene is important enough to mention WP:DUE or it isn't.) Tag: Undo
• 17:3917:39, 19 September 2024 diff hist 0 The Firing Squad (2024 film) Box office 9th
• 17:3717:37, 19 September 2024 diff hist +2 The Fall Guy (2024 film) Gross. Use same figures consistently. $180.5 million normally rounds up to $181 million, it is misleading to truncate it to $180 million.
• 17:0117:01, 19 September 2024 diff hist +2 Borderlands (film) Gross. Use same figures consistently. $32.7 million normally rounds up to $33 million.
• 17:0017:00, 19 September 2024 diff hist +2 Challengers (film) Gross. Use same figures consistently.
• 16:5916:59, 19 September 2024 diff hist +3 Cabrini (film) Gross. Use same figures consistently. current
• 16:5816:58, 19 September 2024 diff hist +1 Bad Boys: Ride or Die Math fail. $403,655,003 rounds up to $403.7 million. Article body got it right, Infobox and lead section wrong.
• 16:5716:57, 19 September 2024 diff hist +2 Bad Boys: Ride or Die Gross. Use same figures consistently. $403.6 million normally rounds up to $404 million, it is misleading inaccurate, and unnecessary to truncate it down to $403 million. This encyclopedia should at least be able to get basic mathematics right.
• 16:5316:53, 19 September 2024 diff hist +14 The 4:30 Movie (film) Long plot. Over 800 words. Should be 400 to 700 words. WP:FILMPLOT
• 16:5116:51, 19 September 2024 diff hist 0 Rebel Ridge Update Rotten Tomatoes.
• 16:4416:44, 19 September 2024 diff hist −50 The Forge (2024 film) WP:FILMCAST Plot in plot section, cast in cast section. Do not include cast in plot section. WP:FILMCAST
• 16:4216:42, 19 September 2024 diff hist +6 Nostalghia Budget not properly sourced. Citation needed.
• 16:4116:41, 19 September 2024 diff hist −28 Mountains (2023 film) Plot in plot section, cast in cast section. Do not include cast in plot section. WP:FILMCAST
• 16:3616:36, 19 September 2024 diff hist +285 User talk:TryAgainSooner →Ooops: new section Tag: New topic
• 16:3016:30, 19 September 2024 diff hist −8 Pokémon the Movie: I Choose You! Copyedit. Mirror the phrasing used in article body.