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Flat Out (talk) 04:06, 24 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! I saw your post at the Teahouse. I'd love to help you edit your draft about Arthur Vogelsang. I don't know much about poetry but I'm good at finding references. Would you mind if I edited your draft directly, to change a few of the references to wiki-approved mainstream sources? Wieldthespade (talk) 18:49, 24 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Please feel free! Very much appreciate your offer!

Just to help where I can, here are some sources you might consider: External links and sources

1. Poetry Foundation http://www.poetryfoundation.org/bio/arthur-vogelsang

2. Los Angeles Times, View, p. 14, March 27, 1985, “Poets Are Born, Not Paid,” by Andrew Avalos. http://articles.latimes.com/1985-03-27/news/vw-20272_1_american-poet

3. American Hybrid: A Norton Anthology of Contemporary Poetry, W.W. Norton & Co., 2009. http://books.wwnorton.com/books/detail.aspx?ID=8540

4. Verse Daily’s selection from Northwest Review, with a catalog of Vogelsang’s books http://www.versedaily.org/2011/aboutarthurvogelsangnwr.shtml

5. Arthur Vogelsang’s Amazon.com page http://www.amazon.com/Arthur-Vogelsang/e/B001HCXJFS/ref=ntt_dp_epwbk_0

6. Library of Congress Online Catalog http://catalog.loc.gov/vwebv/holdingsInfo?searchId=12404&recPointer=6&recCount=25&bibId=15413048 7. The Boston Review http://www.bostonreview.net/search/node/arthur%20vogelsang

8. The New Yorker http://www.newyorker.com/magazine/2008/12/22/the-fifth-season

9. Evergreen Review http://www.evergreenreview.com/127/p_1948.shtml

10. Zocalo Public Square http://www.zocalopublicsquare.org/2014/03/14/upstate/chronicles/poetry/

11. An interview with Vogelsang and a review of Expedition: New & Selected Poems http://yaakovmurchadha.blogspot.com/2011/03/arthur-vogelsand-interview-plus-review.html

12. The Body Electric: America’s Best Poetry from The American Poetry Review, a W.W. Norton & Co. anthology http://books.wwnorton.com/books/detail.aspx?ID=6971

13. Metro Book Co. http://isbndb.com/d/publisher/metro_book_co.html

14. Ark River Review http://www.bibliopolis.com/main/books/publisher/The%20Ark%20River%20Review.html

15. Reading three poems, with texts and a professional biography http://www.poetryvlog.com/avogelsang.html

16. Author Website http://www.arthurvogelsang.com/index.htm

17. The Pushcart Prize IX, Contents https://evergreen.noblenet.org/eg/opac/record/2380037?qtype=author;query=%20Stein%20%20Rita%20;ac=reviews

18. The Best American Poetry Archive http://www.bestamericanpoetry.com/archive/?id=8 http://www.bestamericanpoetry.com/archive/?id=21

19. Emerson College, Ploughshares https://www.pshares.org/authors/arthur-vogelsang

Actually, here's the content I've come up with -- again, please use freely:

Arthur Vogelsang (b. January 31, 1942) is an American poet and editor.

Biography

Born in Baltimore, Maryland, he attended public schools there and worked five years at the Greyhound Bus Terminal while he earned a BA in English at the University of Maryland and an MA from the Johns Hopkins Writing Seminars. He met his wife Judith Ayers at Hopkins.1,2,3 After graduation they moved to New York where Vogelsang worked as an Editing Supervisor for the McGraw- Hill Book Company in College Textbooks and the International Division. Subsequently, he earned an MFA from the Iowa Writers Workshop.1

Vogelsang’s books of poetry are A Planet (1983), Twentieth Century Women (1988), selected by John Ashbery for the Contemporary Poetry Series, Cities and Towns (1996), which won the Juniper Prize, Left Wing of a Bird (2003), and Expedition: New & Selected Poems (2011).1,4,5 His poetry appears regularly in anthologies such as The Best American Poetry,18 The Pushcart Prize17, and the Norton Anthology American Hybrid 5,6  ; in periodicals such as The Boston Review,7 The New Yorker,8 and Poetry1 ; and online at Verse Daily4, Evergreen Review9, and Zocalo Public Square.10

He was a full-time editor/publisher of The American Poetry Review from 1973-2006. 1,2,11,12,19 With Stephen Berg and David Bonanno, Vogelsang edited the anthology The Body Electric, America’s Best Poetry from The American Poetry Review, (W.W. Norton & Co., 2000), with an introduction by Harold Bloom.12

Vogelsang was sole proprietor, publisher, and editor of Metro Book Co. (1983-2002). The company published a poetry book in 1984, Gerald Stern’s Rejoicings, and one in 1986, Michael Burkard’s The Fires They Kept.13

A literary magazine, The Ark River Review, was edited, usually from Wichita, KS, by Jonathan Katz, A.G. Sobin, and Arthur Vogelsang, appearing between 1971 and 1980. Published mostly as a quarterly, the magazine’s authors included Kenneth Rexroth, Donald Justice, Mark Doty, Ted Kooser, Stephen Dunn, Gerard Malanga, and William Stafford, among numerous others. A special 3-Poet Issue in 1973 contained poetry exclusively from Albert Goldbarth, Michael Ryan, and James Tate, 15 printed pages each, accompanied by a photograph and an extensive contributor’s note on each poet.14

Vogelsang has been employed occasionally as a teacher (University of Nevada MFA/PhD Program, University of Southern California, University of Redlands, Kansas Arts Commission Workshops, University of Iowa Writers’ Workshops).1,2,15,19

Currently he lives in Los Angeles with his wife Judith.

Books

• A Planet (Holt, Rinehart & Winston, 1983).4,5 ISBN: 0-03-062107-0 • Twentieth Century Women (University of Georgia Press, 1988), selected by John

           Ashbery for the Contemporary Poets Series.4,5  ISBN: 0-8203-0995-8

• Cities and Towns (University of Massachusetts Press, 1996), awarded the Juniper Prize.4,5 ISBN:1-55849-021-3 • Left Wing of a Bird (Sarabande Books, 2003).4,5 ISBN: 1-889330-87-6 • Expedition: New & Selected Poems (The Ashland Poetry Press, 2011).4,5 ISBN: 978-0-912592-71-8

Awards

• National Endowment for the Arts Fellowship in Poetry, 19761,2,15,16,19 • National Endowment for the Arts Fellowship in Poetry, 19851,2,15,16,19 • National Endowment for the Arts Fellowship in Poetry, 19961,9,16,19 • California Arts Council Fellowship in Poetry, 19951,9,16,19 • Pushcart Prize, 199517 • The Best American Poetry (Scribner, 1995)1,18 • The Best American Poetry (Scribner, 2007)1,18 • Winner of the University of Georgia Press Contemporary Poets Series, 19881,16 • Juniper Prize, University of Massachusetts Press, 19961,16

Fantastic! I think the most crucial change will be to highlight the most notable points first - I will draft up a lede that highlights the editorial work, most-reviewed works, and notable awards, and break off the career information into it's own section. We may need to remove a few biographical points, as even minor WP:BLP issues can be a deal-breaker around here. I'll send you an update sometime this weekend once my suggested edits are live on the draft. My edits will be mostly technical - so please feel free to revert any of my changes if they affect the accuracy of the article. And thank you - you've done wonderful work putting the article together. It's a valuable addition to the project. Wieldthespade (talk) 22:29, 24 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]